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this was fucking great all-around. your colors are unbelievable. they're gorgeous. i was also really impressed by the staging. i'm sorry to hear you didn't get in - i let fear paralyze me from even applying back when i was interested in going to art school. but i hope all is well now (april 04 ... was a while ago? was that a mistake? sorry, this is the first of these i've seen). also, i've had baba o'reily in my head for the past MONTH so that was delightful.

also, A115! ha!

Raziberry responds:

Hey thanks for the kind words! For the record, A115 wasn't a reference to the famous A113 animation gag, all of my core classes at Sheridan were in the A-wing and actually had those numbers.

hell yeah. i remember seeing this earlier this year. this was great stuff. awesome everything.

some really hilarious poses in there, and even if it's a one-joke cartoon, it serves its purpose well. the only thing i could say is that the ending runs a little too long, explaining the joke. i could be misinterpreting it though. good stuff nonetheless.

hey this was great. charming, funny and adorable. animation was great too.

animation is great, soundtrack is great, and story is great. hits all the marks. good job.

animation is fun in places, but i'm not so sure if this was meant to be a satire, or whether "frank" is a representation of the writer's opinion. you say it's the characteristics of the roles, so i'm led to believe frank is a spoof of "guns are bad" liberals. nevertheless, even if it were a satire on that viewpoint, it seems muddled. i apologize if i seem harsh, because i want this to be constructive, but it feels like the story - whatever story there is - goes literally nowhere.

if this was a satire, i'm led to believe it could be done better.

hey, i enjoyed that. sounds like you had a great time! would love to meet him if i ever got the chance. i liked your storytelling and timing.

this was excellent, and ending was very clever.

i really liked the music and voice acting in this. great job.

AntonM responds:

Thanks man! :D

i think a large part of my dislike for this is that the lines seem oddly structured. the timing is very strange. that's not to say this awful, it's still more original than half the stuff i see here. but i'll agree with other commenters: it does seem very, very boring, and if that was your point and the whole thing is a giant meta-joke, then you've succeeded. this isn't to put you down - i'm not here to do that. this appears to be your first animation here, so maybe you've just got to get a few more going.

also, it's very long. you make the stuff you want to see, and if it is 9 minutes long, then by all means. i've got a few ideas for animations that are upwards of 10 minutes and beyond. but if it is structured like this, then it may have a hard time receiving an audience. this is, of course, all just opinion. i certainly don't want you offended by any of this... i've had enough internet trolls. i hope you take this comment with the heart it was written with.

Domonization responds:

I dunno, I just have a very weird and dry sense of humor. Not everyone's gonna get it. That's cool, though. Was the video a meta-joke? Kinda. I mean, it's not meant to be so boring that people hate it and quit watching it. But at the same time, it's not meant to be super fast-paced either. It's just a simple little cartoon where the humor comes from the characters and the things that they say. If you don't find my kind of humor funny, then I suppose you're not gonna enjoy it very much and it will be boring.

The timing might be off because of the way it was edited. That's why there's pauses between when the characters speak. The lines may look strange to you because this whole cartoon (except the first 7 seconds) was drawn frame-by-frame in Gimp. (You can see how it was done in the speed paint video that I put in the description.) I started working on this before I got Flash.

I don't see it at all as a put-down. I'm glad that you went more in detail in talking about it. Thanks for the review and hopefully you'll like the new video I'm working on better.

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